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DJ PON3 +Clean+ by SignHerePlease DJ PON3 +Clean+ by SignHerePlease
Clean Version so the little ones can enjoy Scratch's awesomeness
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I really like your shading and colour choices. They're all very striking and reminiscent of a nightclub-type environment, which is very appropriate considering that, well, it's Vinyl! This is definitely a unique take on what she would look like in a more humanoid form. I also like the use of the belts in this; I've never seen someone do it like this before, especially on something pony-inspired.
That being said, I do see a few things you could improve on in this picture. for one, the anatomy could use a bit of work, specifically her torso. It seems quite long, especially her waist area. The location of her bellybutton is unclear; I'm guessing it's the thickest point on that line in the middle of her stomach? If so, it's quite far away from her crotch. I'd try to keep the distance slightly more than her hand length, and the distance from her hips to that level slightly less. I also think the line between her collarbone and her left shoulder (the one in the light) is a bit odd, but maybe that's just me. Her neck also seems a tiny bit long, but maybe it just looks like that because of the belt. The line between her boobs and her left shoulder could be a bit straighter.
Lastly, the folds in her clothing don't follow her form, and diminish the sense of volume as a result. The sleeves aren't much of an issue, but the blue bit at her hips keeps throwing me off.
Overall: The idea and shading are great. Anatomy's not bad, but could use improvement. Good attention to detail; I can faintly see the outline of her eyes behind her glasses!
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luis-GAH Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Professional General Artist
weird…
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sorry...
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sweetsweetsunshines Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
cool I like all the neon and bright colors ^^
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^^ I'm glad you do ^^
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BDassassin Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
I like. I wish i could get that outfit for my girlfriend but it is hard to find tight clothes for DD's
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Badass icon man,
but yea, I know EXACTLY what you mean... sometimes if it cant fit though it'll look sexier
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BDassassin Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
thanks, and while that is true it also makes it hurt a little
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Again I'm well aware of this... But I think it's worth it until the clothes tear
Or until someone rips them off :3
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Mallori-Cantare Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Student General Artist
I love the humanised anatomy that you have chosen :D I favorited it :D so pretty
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you ^^
You're very kind ^^
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AnthroLoverJay Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love Vinyl Scratch, and this looks incredibly professional, but I'm a little about her species. At 1st I almost it was meant to be her anthropomorphized, but apart from her ears and horn she looks entirely human. She lacks a tail, snout, and anything else that would be deemed horselike. At the same time she can't be human either because of her horn and ears. I she simply meant to be a hybrid? Despite this, it's an incredibly well crafted piece which clearly shows a lot of time and effort went into it. :D For future reference, I do think she's a bit too skinny, so if you end up doing another one of her you may want to fill her out a bit. Just a suggestion
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Via previous reviews, I'm well aware of the anatomical probs here lol
and I just her to be a humanoid unicorn, hands, but the horn, Ikept the ears as her hair would have looked odd without them. I DID actually draw a tail... and a DJ table but they magically got deleted and i gave up on those cuz redoin them would take too much time
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AnthroLoverJay Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I see. Yeah, it would suck to have to do those again, but I still really like it as it shows a huge amount of genuine effort, and you should be proud of it nonetheless. :D
I'd definitely be interested in seeing another rendition of her, but this time including her tail and turntable. I also still think she's much too skinny, almost to the point of being skeletal (though her hips and legs are nice). She's basically the human equivalent of a horse, right? I think if you added a good 10-20 pounds to her frame she'd look great. Again, just a suggestion
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No no, i totally already knew this, this why I DONT'T ink traditional work anymore
Proportions are out of this world .___. so digital only, I'll def. add the tail cuz it's soo fwuffy
And I am very proud it, at least her heard anyway, it's one of my favorite parts of all my galleries
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AnthroLoverJay Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I get that. I was simply offering tips and support. Best of luck on the next one :)
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you very much ^^
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AnthroLoverJay Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You got it ;)
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AnthroLoverJay Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Whoops, meant to write "I'm a little *confused* about her species"
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Vyctorian Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012   General Artist
Beautiful I love the coloring and color choices very vibrant but also dark. I like it a lot.
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You should see the nude then
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Vyctorian Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012   General Artist
lol
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Astrikos Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012   General Artist
Love the lighting and detail on the piece. Great color balance and palette. I love it great work!
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, I worked really hard on this one. It's good to see the effort appreciated so much ^^
It really makes my day you know?
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Astrikos Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012   General Artist
That's pretty awesome! I'm glad! :hug:
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me too ^^
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Astrikos Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012   General Artist
:heart:
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconbigheartplz:
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Astrikos Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012   General Artist
:glomp:
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
d'aaawwww
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TBascom Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
love mesh
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh man you have no idea
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TBascom Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012
?
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's awesome
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SilentBobKris Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012
Very nice! Love your take on her!
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you ^^
She's awesome no?
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tso00 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
I love seeing your work and all the colors that seem to accumulate to your characters. It looks amazing!
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My character? this is (c) My little Pony, technically....
But thank you,
Haven't you seen the other version already???
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tso00 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012
I don't believe I have as of yet, but the interpretation is what is astounding, and I just admire your skill~
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great words from Great artist, thank you for your praise
I hope I keep up with your expectations
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tso00 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012
You are more than welcome.

I wouldn't find it too hard to manage my expectations, you have great art.
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
THank you =3
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tso00 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
Most welcome!
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
As are you my friend
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BorisFedorov Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very cute
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank You ^^
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BorisFedorov Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem
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slaphoeproductions Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
awesome job!
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Im glad you like it so much ^^
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Sweetseek Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Student Artist
I really love her clothes. <3

and you did a really great job. :hug:
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SignHerePlease Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks ^^
I hate the black stuff

what a terrible censor lol
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